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Vraisemblance (A Poem) by Su’eddie Vershima Agema

Where your eyes stare
those words you whisper
the continual flow of actions…
did it flash forth in a pot
was it something magical growing
from spot to spot?

Is the radiance of the sun
specifically shone on me?
Is utopia carved simply for my warmth?

Has the sun shone forth its bliss?
Why does the moment seize my ease
when dance should be me?

Sprinkle the air with what truth you would
take all the magic that rather should
stand to be the crown of our smiles

Give me this and take away your chance
let me fall to ignorance
and forever enjoy this beauty dance.



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3 thoughts on “Vraisemblance (A Poem) by Su’eddie Vershima Agema

  1. Something strikes a chord in me regarding this piece and its that title more than all else! However did you come up with that?! Is that even a known word?! It does come across like the combination of two words: an English word ‘Semblance’ and a French word ‘Vrai’! Put together and I get ‘True Semblance’! Is that it then Su’eddie?! *raised eyebrow* LMAO!

    Moreso, for some; like our Narrator here, ignorance is bliss and he’d rather just bury his head in the sands, and resist every attempt to be roused from his daydream and reverie! He’s got his head floating in the clouds! In limbo! This is a true representation of a lotta people! Living in denial, cause the truth’s too bitter to accept and will leave ’em utterly devastated and traumatized! So in order to escape, they create a farce, a facade; that will make their burdens so much lighter, in order to live their lives! They will simply have it no other way, by golly! *laughing*

    Every line and verse, the imageries employed; I find amazing! Thanks for this Su’eddie, its nice showcasing one of your very own ‘babies’! Great stuff Sir, Kudos! LOL


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