CONQUEST (Old Fiction) by Su’eddie Vershima Agema

18 thoughts on “CONQUEST (Old Fiction) by Su’eddie Vershima Agema”

  1. Wow! This hilarious piece sure brings back some nostalgic feelings of the days of old! I’d really love to see if this ‘lust-struck’ soldier moved from having a clandestine relationship with this starry-eyed lassie to a lifelong commitment! Should be interesting to know where this quest or conquest takes ’em both! Nice Su’eddie, real nice! Ahem….you wouldn’t by any chance be Viashima would you?! I coulda sworn he sounded a teeny-tiny bit like you! *laughing*

    Keep me in the know when you’re done churning this up! My interest’s soooo piqued! LOL

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    1. Yikes! I totally missed the name of that character! Thank you Yemie! I might have to rework that name o! And no, he definitely sounded nothing like me! Lemme catch you first!
      The story will be completed in its full length and maybe I will work it more into something more complex. It would be a thread to a far wider fabric… Na wa o… See grammar.
      Any ways… You like it? Thank you. I need to clean it up really and put it right.
      How will you have had the story end?

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      1. So Viashima’s not you then?! Really, REALLY?! OHK! I believe you! You just so happened to be sakes! Shit happens abi?! Its one of those things….’Coincidences’, and you really weren’t writing from the heart and being your very own muse! Again Su’eddie, I believe you! I do! I want to! I do???? LMAO!

        Well, am all for twists and turns and some happy endings too on the side, but in all; its YOUR story, so sell it me! Tell it the way you wanna and I’d love it all the same! Does that sound good to you?! LOL

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        1. Of course it will end how IT wants to… I don’t really usually know how my stories will end. Most times even when I plan them, they end up the way they want. When I force it, it comes out just too wrong… or it just stops pouring forth from my brain. Sad about it. Sometimes you begin to wonder if you write the story or if it is the story writing itself … or if your stories are the ones that write you in the end…
          The only thing that I am sure of at the end of the day is that I have to tidy up whatever the story spirits itself to become. Editing and fine tuning come forth then… And at other times, they force themselves to simply end differently again.
          That partly explains why I had no idea of some of those things…
          But to you now, se you write fiction na… How does the writing process work for you?

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        2. Chee, thanks Su’eddie; you just succeeded in making my head go into a spin with those ‘explanations’! Wow, some deep stuff that is! And its kinda mystical too, that the story turns around and begins to ‘write’ the writer! That’s sooo scatter-brained but it does make a world of sense in a twisted kinda way! Rich! LOL

          I don’t write fictions for now! I write straight from the heart as my blog name denotes, from personal experiences! Perhaps, I’ll dabble into fiction sometime, that remains to be seen! We’ll see! LOL

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        3. We will definitely wait to see… In your case, I can see why you might not want to dabble into fiction… Your non-fiction is as catchy as fiction. Weya o… Don’t waste time… Get to the pen and let’s see you do something with your pen o… Don’t let the ink of your thoughts dry fa o!

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        4. Hehehe! I’ll take that as a compliment then! That my writes are ‘cooler’ or ‘doper’ than fiction! Thank you Sir and I’ll try desperately hard to keep and hold on fast to those thoughts that will get my ink flowing by golly! Yes I shall! Dryness of ink’s NOT an option! No way Jose! *smh* LOL

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        5. Eh… I didn’t say they are! Hee hee hee! Don’t mind me 🙂

          It isn’t just about declaring ‘This ink shall not dry and adding speaking of tongues’ o! Action… ACTION… ACTION!

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        6. Hehehe! Like duh, yes you did say it and I read you loud and clear too! Action speaks louder than words and I shall aspire to get cracking and ACT, once I’m pretty darn good and mighty plain ready! Soon, hopefully! *tsking* LMAO!

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        7. Yep! You did too! Deal with it Su’eddie! Hmph! LMAO!

          Moreso, ‘Hopeful’ by Twista, not so sure I know that one! The one I know is that sung by Faith Evans with lyrics along the lines of

          ‘I am hopeful
          Yes I am
          Hopeful for today
          Take this music
          And use it
          It will take you away
          Yes be hopeful, hopeful
          Cause love will find a way
          I know, it aint easy
          But er, its okay
          Yes be hopeful.

          So then, is this the one?! Cause I plain fail to see the connection! *tongue out* ROTFLMAO!

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        8. Hee hee hee! I forgive you It is ‘Hope’ as sang by Twista ft Faith Evans. It is the remix I was talking about…

          ‘I am hopeful
          Yes I am
          Hopeful for today
          Take this writing
          And use it
          It will take you way
          Yes I am hopeful, hopeful
          Cause ink will find a way
          I know, it aint easy
          But its okay
          I will be hopeful.

          😛

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        9. Damn Mama! I just goofed big time, totally lost sight of the fact that, that was a collabo! Its an old tune though but even at that…. Youch! And I think am digging your version Su’eddie! Perhaps a career in songwriting, yes?! *raised eyebrow* Rankadede! I trowey salute Sir! Plenty twale! Wowzers!!!! LMAO!

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        10. 🙂 I just listened to ‘Hope’ again… We missed some lines sha… but no biggy. It isn’t Bible that we are quoting, abi? Kosi wahala … Ba komi 🙂

          Well, yes, we will relish all that we can.

          Haba na… Not fair, the blush will make my black too one kain… Not fair o! Gaskiya, no fair!

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        11. We missed some lines did we now?! Oops! Well, that’s no mortal sin! Its totally forgivable, am sure! *rme* LOL

          Blush on, who’s hating?! And as regards that discoloration….its temporary! In time, you shall retain your full natural colour! I guarantee! *laughing*

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        12. Yaaaaay! Hmmm, I wonder why that doesn’t sound like cheery news… This, your talk of my colour back… Hmmmm….

          Okay o…

          What’s ‘RME’… Na wa o… *Just when you think you’ve figured it all out, they bring one back that you have no idea how to deal with!

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        13. Hahahahaha! I just couldn’t resist putting in a final word before jetting off when I saw this comment! RME means ‘Rolling My Eyes Su’eddie! Are we pretty clear now then?! I’ll bet! Do you release me now?! *shaking my head* LMAO!

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        14. Ohhhhhh! Hee hee hee! Na wa o! *ScratchingMyGorimapa! Just when I thought I had learnt it all and my younger siblings wouldn’t sell me again… But nooooo, there’s always something new! Chai!

          Chai!

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